Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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Blitz
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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A question about use of imperatives: How would you punctuate...

stop said david or i'll get mum

OH and I have a difference of opinion!!
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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Blitz wrote:A question about use of imperatives: How would you punctuate...

stop said david or i'll get mum

OH and I have a difference of opinion!!
I think I would go for the following, but others may disagree.

"Stop," said David, "or I'll go and get Mum!"
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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"Stop!" said David. "Or I 'ill get Mum."

Stop is the imperative so needs to be by itself with an exclamation mark. That would be my answer, but others may well differ. DG
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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DG, I agree, but a sentence cannot begin with Or, hence I chose the first version. I think that actually the sentence is colloquial so the usual rules don't apply.
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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Thanks. OH agreed with Moved. I thought,

"Stop!" said David, "or I'll get Mum."

Hope nothing as contentous as this comes up or it will be like 'dash-gate' in Captain Corr, 2010's paper.
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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moved wrote:
Blitz wrote:A question about use of imperatives: How would you punctuate...

stop said david or i'll get mum

OH and I have a difference of opinion!!
I think I would go for the following, but others may disagree.

"Stop," said David, "or I'll go and get Mum!"
Does mum have to start ith a capital M?
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Re: Similar practice papers to English standard for Essex

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Yes, as it is a name. Dad, Daddy, Mum and Mummy need capitals, but mother and father only start with capitals when they are being used as proper rather than common nouns.

The old fashioned girl said "I would like a new frock please, Mother," to her mother.
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