You almost certainly have the right to see any entry relating to your
However, this is different in that you are seeking information with the names of other children (which you have no right to see).
There seems no reason why these names cannot be redacted, though.
The school is probably not being unreasonable, but if you want to pursue the matter, you could try adapting the specimen letter here:http://www.elevenplusexams.co.uk/appeal ... cation#b58
Replace "Subject access request (Data Protection Act 1998)
" with "Freedom of Information Act
", and "This request is being made under Section 7 of the Data Protection Act 1998
" with "This request is being made under the Freedom of Information Act
In other words, you would not be seeking any personal information, but merely asking "What incidents were recorded?"