TENSE AGREEMENT
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TENSE AGREEMENT
DS and I had much pleasure to read recently Clockwork by Philip Pullman... What a gripping story!
However, there is a grammatical point which retained my attention in two sentences (English is not my mother tongue).
Here is the quote (p83):
There in the middle of the room stood Sir Ironsoul, with his helmet shining blankly and his sword slanting down. He was holding it like that because the point was in the throat of Karl the apprentice, who lay stark dead beside him.
Gretl nearly fainted, but she was a brave girl, and she had seen what lay in Karl’s hand.
My problem:
I don’t understand why the author uses a present tense and not a past one in the two relative clauses:
because the point was in the throat of Karl the apprentice, who lay stark dead beside him.
she had seen what lay in Karl’s hand.
Personally, I would have written (may be influenced by my native tongue?)
because the point was in the throat of Karl the apprentice, who laid stark dead beside him.
she had seen what laid in Karl’s hand.
What is your reaction? Is it possible to have past verbs (as well as a present ones like Pulman) in these two clauses?
However, there is a grammatical point which retained my attention in two sentences (English is not my mother tongue).
Here is the quote (p83):
There in the middle of the room stood Sir Ironsoul, with his helmet shining blankly and his sword slanting down. He was holding it like that because the point was in the throat of Karl the apprentice, who lay stark dead beside him.
Gretl nearly fainted, but she was a brave girl, and she had seen what lay in Karl’s hand.
My problem:
I don’t understand why the author uses a present tense and not a past one in the two relative clauses:
because the point was in the throat of Karl the apprentice, who lay stark dead beside him.
she had seen what lay in Karl’s hand.
Personally, I would have written (may be influenced by my native tongue?)
because the point was in the throat of Karl the apprentice, who laid stark dead beside him.
she had seen what laid in Karl’s hand.
What is your reaction? Is it possible to have past verbs (as well as a present ones like Pulman) in these two clauses?
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Re: TENSE AGREEMENT
'Lay' here is the past tense of 'to lie'. 'Laid' is the past tense of 'to lay'. Quick guide here: http://www.aimpublishing.com/word-usage ... d-lain.php.
Re: TENSE AGREEMENT
A big thank you! It's crystal clear now!
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I doubt many native speakers would be so confident!