kenyancowgirl wrote:
I'm not an expert on appeals but...General advice is always focus on her academic ability first and foremost. If they ask you why you think there was a shortfall express that you can only think it was nerves on the day, and as she settled into the test she improved, but that it was very unexpected, as you hope they can see form the head's recommendation. It would also be worth a nod towards why this particular school. The positives and specifics that make it the right school - sorry - no idea but am assuming because you have mentioned Catholicism, that it is a Catholic Secondary and you are practising Catholics (and have provided a reference/application support from your priest?) But is there anything else - for eg is it a specialist science school and she has always wanted to be a vet (that you can evidence) or a specialist music school and she is a concert pianist (I'm being facetious, but hopefully you get what I am saying!)
Try not to be negative about the school you have been allocated (you have been positive up thread, I know!) - I would probably not mention that school too much - focus on her academic, a nod to the nerves as a kind of extenuating circumstance, and why the school is the best fit for her.
Thanks kenyancowgirl - really appreciate your comments on this and reassurance that we are headed in the right direction